Keep on the good work and don't stop.
Ahh gee, what can i say?
First, I whould give you 10's but by doing so, I might not see improvement in any future animation of yours. So basically you can see what is better done than the other things in my opinion. Still it's really great and i hooked up instantly. I've watched your previous episodes later on and we clearly see a improvement.
Secondly, I have nothing against the screen text boxes and the lack of voices since it is part of the spirit of the animation... This is your style, I guess. - you could try to improve this part to make the interactivity better with the dialogue boxes more easy (like a spacebar as I have seen written below). So keep your stylish colours to each character.
Finally, Keep up the good work 'cuz you surely can improve - Good luck and i'll be waiting for next episode (or part).