[update: due to what people have been saying, i'm now going to try and turn this in to a "full" moive :)]I some times have a hard time finishing any of the animation I start. So I some times force my self to do a simple short in one night. This one is about love, there’s nothing deep to it, it’s just meant to be cute. I hope you enjoy it. It’s taken me 8 hours from about 5pm to 1am to finish. I’d really like to thank Larger Than Life for the amazing song, go look them up at largerthanlifemusic.net or http://www.purevolume.co
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I Like the idea of this and i know exatly what you mean by not being able to finish stuff even short stuff, but anyways onto the flash it was decent, the "ART" was okm but could be improved with abit of details and such, but i do like it, so props to you, keep up the good work...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Finishing things hehe...
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A nice and pleasent animation simple butneat stuff here...
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i did 'finish' it in the end... http://www.newgrounds.com/por tal/view/273773 i'd like to have done it better but i was sick of the thing by the end hehe
alright
it was weird but i liked it
Alright.
This movie, in theory, could be good.
It's repetitive, and cyclical, which, it makes sense to do, because of the nature of the relationship being viewed, but the emo-pop-ska-whatever, that's playing makes it quite a bit less watchable and in fact, a little bit of an eyeroller.
I liked your style, and your animation is very smooth, it's a very well produced, well designed piece, just not the deepest or more plotfilled, overall, alright job, do something more with your obvious talent.
Thank you :) and again music all about taste hehe but i get your point... Thanks to the responce from people like you i am going to try and turn this in to a real story, won't get any deeper but will get more plot :D
sorry man
I didn't especially care for the music. If I had liked it, I might not have minded watching the loop over and over so much.
Yeah, I get your point with the loop, but I still don't LIKE it.
Graphics are in a primitive style, but I like them, except for the one drawing where he's handing her the box. In that one he looks like he's got some kind of creeping crud growing on him. In all the others, it looks fine, but something about that one is just wrong.
Ya, that drawing not the best in the world :) and again i'm now working on a full story non looped vershion of this
wtf the music!!!
this was pretty cool, and I like the infinite zoom idea. As you already know (I believe others have stated it) it should have an ending of sorts... loops are okay but it's a natural instinct to need an ending, a conclusion of sorts.
The only real complaint I have is the music... first using pop-music for anything debases it, but this music was just way to energetic and... intrusive... maybe it's just my taste... meh
either way, good job. I liked the drawing style very much :)
I'm prity unashamed when it comes to the fact i love poppunk and for me the song works for the loop... like i said i'm now going to work this in to a full moive with and ending and everything and i may end up useing a diffrent song ones i get more of a feeling for it