Nice but more...
I really liked the angle you played with this... and the idea of it looping didn't even bother me that much.... kind of showed that the poor little guy didn't give up hope! However, if you are goig nto make somethign that loops like that you need to compress the file size ALOT more... or get rid of the loop and make it into a story. SO either or... compress or make longer (the story not the song:-p) Good luck and good job!