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short stories(clickclick)

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This is my first flash work so i dont no what your goan think if its bad tell me whats wrong plzz.
And i will be making quit a few of these short stories.

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sorta reminds me of the canadian militia. or the border gaurds. they have guns,but they cant shoot you.

not bad

i thought the drawings were pretty good, but i the animation left much to be desired... but i still liked it, made me smile briefly

story is stolen...

im sure i already saw this
i think it was an aa:o related flash clip ive seen long ago

where shall i begin

the animation was jerky
took too long for the story to unfold no music what gives?
and showing an american solider getting killed? whats wrong with you but oh well its your movie i respect your artistic direction but it really was done too jerky and clumsy
fix the animation problems and make at least a small story or anything for gawds sake and add music some dramatic music and show bullets out of the gun and show the muslim guy laugh at least at the end

not the best

cant say i enjoyed this one little bit. too short. its kinda like slapstick "comedy" but delivered far too slow because of the text. if that whole scene had taken 3-4 seconds instead of about 15 and if it had voice recordings instead of that text, it might have been quite funny. but for now, no thanks.

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2.24 / 5.00

Sep 4, 2005
6:17 AM EDT