whiked!!!
thats good i wish it was longer but thats what short storys are for good go on you 1st one:)
Reviews for "short stories(clickclick)"
pretty gud
first flash eh...nice quickie but u need more sound. u got nice drawings though...if u need help u can find tutorials all over newgrounds or u can contact me and ill c if i cud help
HAhahahahahahha owned hahahahhaha us soldier owned
Ha great...i really like your style of drawing. But, mayun you should really add more sound and animation....if you get this to work...you will have 3+ flash movies !
Good luck !
meh
it wasnt the best but keep working on it an it'll get better
yes, he gets pwned...
Nice original graphics. Very clean up to the point of the kill. I felt it lingered a little at the beginning. No shyte it's short! Background/atmospheric sound would be good to add. Yes, he gets pwned, but it wasn't "that" funny. I think it would've been a little funnier if your comical beats were better timed. Inb the end, I would've liked to see something a bit longer. Keep trying!