Pretty Good!
A nice birthday animation this is! Short, simple, funny and with smooth animation. If you could color it that would be even better, but it's nice as it is as well. Keep up the good work!
-cd-
Author Comments
well this is my second flash, but according to the comments on got for the last one, the first wasnt consider a flash and didnt make it because it was really short with no plot. SO, i made another one. im still new to this flash program but i hope u enjoy this one better than the last.
-BuBBos ;)
weird
it was way too weird and cheesy try better drawing and storyline
Not bad
It was a good idea, but bad story line. I mena a birthday present? And there was nothing to make her think it was poisunous. I havent ever seen a flash with that type of drawing. Next time, trie better
Not bad...
This movie wasn't bad by any means, but it still is a little weird. Sometimes, the animation was a little messed up and looked cheesy, like when the girl turned around. The music was a little messed up at the end of the loop, but the sound effects were pretty good. This has a good storyline, but could use some fine tuning.
your own style
you really have your own style of flash
bravo