nice
really nice for a first flash, animations were really smooth, graphics looked really nice, music was good and it had a ok story.. not bad at all!!
Author Comments
Update: Its not the Zoloft guy.
Hey im Jayarr. this is my first submission to Newgrounds. Actually ill be honest..ive had flash for 48 hours now. So with that in mind..when you leave comments..give me positive criticism. Im a big fan of most of the FBF animation here and elsewhere and i did my best to come up with a short cartoon about really...nothing.....it started as just an exercize.
and became what it is.
Needless to say its not done..not too fer from done but its not done.
Let me know if you like the style, animation and so forth.
Thanks--www.jayarr.com
That looked like a tamagotchi
That was some nice animation. What was that rounds ball thing anyway.
Jayarr responds:
tamagotchi..jesus you brought it back a few years..it does look like a tamagatchi....i used to have one..thats really sad. sometimes i forgot to turn off the sound..and it would beep "im hungry" in class. jesus whats wrong with me?
I like it.
First animation?
Fucking amazing. I wanna see what you'll be pumping out in a year or two...
Jayarr responds:
well see. thats. This is how bored i am ..i respond to every review..not that there are alot....yeah.
It was pretty cute.
I didnt really get it but it had some really good animation but you could make the music a little louder,anyways you did a really good first flash.
Jayarr responds:
Yeah there wasnt anything to get...just an exercize. damn i have a shitty rating.
((( INTERESTING )))
Hmm it was an interesting animation, i like how that little white blob would talk to the flower like it was his friend, and how the flower acts back to him was kinda funny heh, i also liked the simple music in the background, and its cool you did the music yourself. The animation is nice, and clear, it was nice...
~X~
Jayarr responds:
I performed that song with the lead pianist from the rpo. actually i DIDNt play the piano but if you listen to the whole song int he portal im beatbozing...
