Focus point
The animation was nice. I like the color key and the moving sky. Overall, the graphics were pretty nice.
The focus point is on the left side. It's hard to read the text sometimes. Because the words are so close to the edge, it gets distracting and hard to read. You don't have to center the drawing but keep the text, or the focus away from being too close to the edge.
Either way, it was a pretty decent movie.
Good luck on your next flash~
much appreciated.
Pretty good!!
Hey, you just reviewed my flash and said to check this out, so here I am.
Thats really good for your first time!! I like the animation and the backround. But I dont like the "To Be Continued"
Otherwise great job. FBF blobs are teh leet.
Aah..your flash is cool. Its strange but good. You just signed up right?
okay, lots of potential
very good for having flash for 48 hours-- nice artwork--quite simple flash you made, but it seems there is lots of potential for great flash there- keep up the good work. work on more complex flash and submit more--I'm positive you will make good flash.
wish me luck. Thanks.
Let me give you a hint
If the movie is not done....
Do..not...submit...it.
If you want POSITIVE feedback, submit something that will deserve POSITIVE feedback.
*groan( youre so angry. Was it that bad. Now i know alot of people submit crap looking for blam points or whatever..but i thought the flash was strong enough to submit. Im sorry man...can we still be friends. Or would you rather sit at home and play cs with a bag of doritos on your left and pepsi in your darthvader 711 cup on your right. Frag reaper.
Wow!
Amazingly smooth animated. I will not be surprised the day your work appears at the front page.
Youre the bomb. Thank you. BOOM!