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that my flash is getting better..plz drop a review!

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right...

Ok, really normally i don't give bad scores, (cause most of the time it get's you down and stuff). So don't take the 6 as a bad thingy :P. I have to say you have a blurry style (which i like ^^) to bad the end was kinda fastly done :P. But believe me i know how hard it is to keep working on 1 thing (still got about 5 unfinished things here, cause i am lazy -.-). Anyway, the sound... yeah could have been a bit more :). the crying baby sound in the end was funny though :P. I have to say i am suprised this didn't get blammed... most of the time there are always people that just blam stuff with comments like: "Omg you noob, go kill yourself", "Did you really think this wasn't gonna get blammed??", "LOLMAO, ROFL, YOU SUCK BIGTIME FAG!!!!" or "Yay free blampoint!!". So my advice is (I know it's cool when many people can watch your movie, but kinda sucks when it get's blammed so...) Keep practicing, never give up (so don't stop halfway and start a new cartoon like me :P) even legendary frog or gerkinman had to start somewhere (they just didn't submit it ^^). So when you made something you are really proud of and your friends go complelty insane cause YOU made that piece of heavenly sh*t, then you can submit it ;).

P.S.: don't mind those other noobs with there O points bet they don't even know what flash is :P

Cookierabbit responds:

Thanks alot for the encouragement, u were practicly completley right abt the ~other~ users who just spam 0's at just abt every new submission. And you have no idea how confused and happy i wasn when this didnt get blammed, =P I was working on sprites next, but i got lazy XD maby ill get bak to it

eh...

Horrible, absolutely horrible.Do us a favor and get blammed. I don't know why people make such stupid stuff with their time, you should really try making bettter flashes. So hopefully you will take my advice and make some good stuff you can do it, as long as you set your mind to it...
P.S. sorry about all the zeros!!!

Cookierabbit responds:

look, unless your going to give some REAL advice on how to improve, just shut up and hit the 0 button, i dont care..just dont submit crappy reviews..

Sounds cool , But Could be better

I feel that That sound is good, but the graphics could use improvement, and i agree with the person before me it could be longer. I would also rate higher if you did those things.

Cookierabbit responds:

kk thx

well....

you tried and good job but in the future i would like to see better graphics and more longer then i would grade it higher

Cookierabbit responds:

ok thx

okay

i'm glad that there was subtitles because I could barely hear the person who is talking... this is drawn and animated decently. This is a very strange movie overall. It doesn't really make much sense.

Cookierabbit responds:

Ya..cant say that i did the sounds very well, its first time i tryed to sync so i expected it to be not so good..thx for review

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Votes
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Score
1.99 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 27, 2005
3:30 AM EDT