Nice idea, but poorly worked out
First of all I got to say I liked the idea of this movie very much but there were two things that disturbed me. One of them was that the undertitles weren't synchronised with the voice of the man. The other is that your fire was very poorly drawn, it looked like some dots of red and orange and yellow.
You do have potential if you try to learn some better animating skills.
Thx, actually, the voice was recorded in one thingy, so i had to sync the text with the voice, which i got a little lazy with,
and well..ilike the fire =/ thx for reviewing
water.
A fire can be put out.
By fire, i meant war, it easilty starts and is very hard to put out, even with water...
alright,alright,...
i just recently started flash and have yet to actually conduct my own film.i cant wait till i get good enough to illustrate/animate like that.
good job
vote-3
belive me, this isnt very good, thanks for your support. It just takes practise, and ALOT of time XD
3 out of 5
I really liked the pre-loader, but the graaphics wernt very good. Also the narrator needed to talk faster. But anyways for a starter your pretty good at plots. Thats why Im giving you a 6, so you have some room to improve on.
THANKS! I like the preo loader too ^^, its helpfull that you have kind words =)
sigh
Tired old cliches, tired old drama. Where's the old man getting hit in the groin by a football?...
Codeguru
what!? This has nothing to do with ghroins or footballs..