Not too bad
But next time, make the words go by a little slower. I can read fast, but not THAT fast!
Keep up the good work though, this is pretty good :3
Author Comments
Storywise this first episode doesn't have much to offer, but it's my intent to
slowly improve that each episode.
If you hate watching flash movies without sound you better skip this one, cus it
has none. That kinda sucks, I know, just letting you know in advance I would've
gladly seen it otherwise, but at this time it would be very very troublesome for me
to release it with sound.
nice
all it needs is sound, and so u know i cant read that fast
Wow... I like where this is going,
I just have to ask one thing. The night before you made this did you watch Ghost in the Shell or something? The whole naked robotic chick shell deal sort of reminded me of that. Other than the needlessly fast dialogue, I really really liked it. Great Animation, great work.
arghhh....
slow down the freakin dialouge!!! i kept having to pause
this was good...
but it was greatly effected by one thing...
SOUND!!! you need it dude! you need sound effects, and music, and possibly some dialogue! without sound, this movie was effected so badly becuase of that.
But overall, the story line seems great, the graphics seem awesome aswell as the animation, and it has a good amount of violence. so i cant wait for the next ox6, but you really need sound!!
Overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP!)