i like it...
maybe subtitles would do it? or speach? either way, the fading text is a little hard to read sometimes...but good job!!
can't wait to see the next one!
Reviews for "ox6"
Wow... I like where this is going,
I just have to ask one thing. The night before you made this did you watch Ghost in the Shell or something? The whole naked robotic chick shell deal sort of reminded me of that. Other than the needlessly fast dialogue, I really really liked it. Great Animation, great work.
MY EYES, MY EYES
I had to watch twice just to get what was going on. I don't mind reading, but not that fast, slow it down.
Oh yea, give her some nipples for gods sake!!
Not too bad
But next time, make the words go by a little slower. I can read fast, but not THAT fast!
Keep up the good work though, this is pretty good :3
AH
I'm a fast reader and a lot of the text was way too fast, that needs to be sorted out straight away.. you definitely need to add sound and maybe animate slightly more like breathing or small movements..only slightly because the flash seemed pretty decent on its own. i look forward to the next episode