Ok, it's short, but it's how my book starts out. Yes I'm writing a book about it. I'm making movies after I write the book. It's a lot better than the intro though. The next one will be even more exciting because it's where it all starts off. To give you a little background on the whole thing, it starts off on the cliff that Trillian lives on, a pirate ship sails up drops off treasure then leaves, Trillian then goes to try and steal it. While there some unknown people in armour knock him out. The End. Tell me what you think.
What the hell?
I'm sorry dude, but I didnt understand anything about it, it was all...well I just didnt get it, I know its part of some book...but maybe you should think about redoing this cartoon and actually adding it with episode two to make it...a super episode and therfore, It'll make more sense. I hope.
What just happened there?
That would have been easier to follow had we known what was going on. Secondly, the audio clips were cobbled together poorly. Maybe try finding a tool to fade the music out or in?
Lastly, ignore the abuse, and just spend more time drawing and animating. It may not have been a stickman cartoon, but the animation was very similar.
ohhh wow amazing ohhhh sarcasm ohhhh
Gee maybe i should make a movie just like that except about a bagger at a FREAKING WALMART!!!
Ummm
Ok I feel this piece well isn't really worth watching. The story is about a person cutting their hair and shaving. Nice try though.
NOT GOOD
THIS MAKES NO SENSE. BUT THIS IS NOT STUPID BUT THIS IS ALSO NOT GOOD. TRY TO IMPROVE ON YOUR FLASH SKILLS. AND STORY