i want more
almost like movie trailer but what is with the cutting the hair guy it almost made me nit watch it at all
Reviews for "Trillian Episode One"
Not too bad but not great either
All it was is some guy cutting his hair. Next time send something that has to do with your story other than that not bad.
this sucked
two words man
you
suck
Uhmm...
Let's look at this here. Trillian = name of one of the main characters in the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. The first scene = identical to the beginning of So Long and Thanks For All The Fish, where Arthur Dent comes back to Earth and cuts his hair and beard. Looks like you ran out of ideas to borrow after that, though.
Go back to the drawing board
There was no plot, no characterization, no dialogue, no action. As a movie, this was horrendous. As a book, it was even worse.
I REALLY HOPE THIS WAS JUST A TRAILER.
Otherwise, you need to go back to brainstorming, come up with a few good ideas, work them out, and then write out a good story. Judging from this crap, you'll need to outline your entire plot before you actually begin writing the story.
And don't forget the dialogue, characters or plot like you did here.