Hey Art, I know that I rarely visit you, but I've drawn a pretty picture. It's supposed to be a bay, or a beach. It's got the cliff in the background with the sun setting. It's not fantastic, as I don't take Art at school, and I know the perspective is off on some parts. There is some detail that is missing on the scanned image, such as some texture on the cliffs, sand and water. Sorry.
Tips?
I had no colours in class, sorry.
your line placement is nice but it all seems a bit unrealistic. tis ok.
No offence to you, but it's kind of ugly.
Try looking at a picture of a beach, notice the smooth curve and rough edges rather than making the lines quite, um, sketched.
The only thing I would say is that compared to the rest of the picture, the lines where the water meet the beach are too dense. Erasing some of them make it seem much more defined and remove the cluttered feeling.
I hate working over someone's drawing without explicit permission, alway make me feel like a thief.
I'm making Signatures and Profile pictures. Want one ? Just drop by in my profile and do a request !
I looks a lot like a bad MS drawing....
And I really didn't like the way you drew the sea...
