At 8/1/11 04:13 AM, CloudEater wrote: my hand is my canvas
we are trees
hi
shiity drawing
..gets one somewhat helpful review
People think this is a useless review.
Author's Response:
"No."
>:C
Who is the hunter?
ugh....ok. First of all, the style, obviously you don't know how to use it, you can't use that kind of style with a picture/image in movement, why? well because the train for example doesn't look like is 100% moving... because of the style. Then again, I said "not 100%". It does look like an intent of make a train in movement;now, while the train tries to be in movement the kid is just stand there with out any movement at all, it looks like a fucking stamp , why? again, because of a really bad use of this style. Now to the next, and probably the WORST fucking thing about this picture: the bear....more specifically the smile, it's more than a disaster, it's horrible. Don't know why but you just decided to use the pencil on it... very bad decision, it doesn't match at all with the rest of the picture. And yeah, EVEN if you want it to look like that, again... bad decision. All this makes an aweful picture and something disgusting to look at. It's a beautiful, solid, and big piece of shit. Have a great day sir. =
Who is the hunter?
At 8/5/11 06:21 AM, Knocturne wrote: This is why I suck at drawing
You suck at drawing because some fag who doesn't know much about art thinks your style is bad.
I just think you need to try and give your paintings more details &or texture.
You can draw well, your art just lacks sometimes when there is no inking or lineart.
In this drawing (#) the body looks really flat and the drawing seems unfinished. With lineart the flatness wouldn't be as much of a problem. Your train drawing also has that flatness problem/ lack of depth.
This drawing (#), while it is outlineless it has texture, shading (although the shading is kinda odd in some places) and some depth.
This drawing (#) doesn't really have shading apart from the dark parts around the collar, but the outline/sketch thing makes the drawing seem complete and.. good.. :)
That guy saying your stuff is bad because of your use of 'this style' isn't helpful at all and doesn't make sense.. :I ,~so yea, you just need to work on depth and shading when you do art or something like that.
At 8/5/11 06:21 AM, Knocturne wrote: This is why I suck at drawing
This is in response to this painting?
I can see what he's saying, but he has no idea to describe it. Such as this gem:
It does look like an intent of make a train in movement; now, while the train tries to be in movement the kid is just stand there with out any movement at all, it looks like a fucking stamp
I agree. For what reason?
why? again, because of a really bad use of this style.
Style has nothing to do with it. The pics on Google follow the train, and the background blurs since it is moving rapidly away from the train. There are also lots of lines which suggest the path of the train.
Now to the next, and probably the WORST fucking thing about this picture: the bear....more specifically the smile, it's more than a disaster, it's horrible. Don't know why but you just decided to use the pencil on it... very bad decision, it doesn't match at all with the rest of the picture.
The smile doesn't nuke the picture to make it an abomination, but it could look more like it was attached to the bear, rather than a scribble over the painting. You could try using a softer edged brush, or draw it on a new new Multiply or Soft Light layer.
Of course nothing's more reliable at getting your message across than a good ol' insult at the end.
Particularly since the artist is the only person who's going to read it ...
At 8/5/11 08:22 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: This is in response to this painting?
Personally I think the awkward thing about the painting is that the bear's entire body is pointed away from the train but the picture is acting like he's pointed towards it. By all accounts he shouldn't be able to see that girlboychild the way he's standing.
Aigis - Putting the 'ai' back in 'Aigis'.
my post is so much better than Rob's and Ian's...
we are trees
At 8/5/11 01:50 PM, CloudEater wrote: my post is so much better than Rob's and Ian's...
we are trees
What's with the we are trees thing?
Also, good points cept Aigis, because I do believe the bear is doing a 3/4 stance like a performer on stage would do so the audience can see them better while they talk with another actor.
I guess if I focus on finishing the drawing and pay more attention to texture and detail I'll get over some of the suck but the guy's pm made me laugh because I guess he thought I thought of myself as awesome
Who is the hunter?
At 8/5/11 01:58 PM, Knocturne wrote:At 8/5/11 01:50 PM, CloudEater wrote: my post is so much better than Rob's and Ian's...What's with the we are trees thing?
we are trees
Also, good points cept Aigis, because I do believe the bear is doing a 3/4 stance like a performer on stage would do so the audience can see them better while they talk with another actor.
The angle that the bear's body is facing is irrelevant and stupid.
Comment on my post instead Keeeeff.
At 8/5/11 07:36 AM, CloudObler wrote: That guy saying your stuff is bad because of your use of 'this style' isn't helpful at all and doesn't make sense.. :I ,~so yea, you just need to work on depth and shading when you do art or something like that.
Thank you, it really hit home for me, I'm going to work on a drawing that relies on texture and lighting a bit more or at least there'd be attention to these aspects to create a greater sense of depth.
Who is the hunter?
At 8/5/11 01:58 PM, Knocturne wrote: Also, good points cept Aigis, because I do believe the bear is doing a 3/4 stance like a performer on stage would do so the audience can see them better while they talk with another actor.
This is what the picture looks like to me, Knocturne:
(1. is a stage play, 2. is your picture).
Aigis - Putting the 'ai' back in 'Aigis'.
Would anyone like to participate in a dA Who can get the most favorites on their fan art, type contest? For giggles?
Who is the hunter?
At 8/5/11 11:01 PM, Knocturne wrote: Would anyone like to participate in a dA Who can get the most favorites on their fan art, type contest? For giggles?
No, Knoc, stop trying to boost your ego.
Your fanart/whoring dA has so many watchers and so many views, it wouldn't really be fair.
Yes, I'm calling your contest unfair because you are too popular. QQ
I will, however, make fanart for shits and giggles, but only if my Moon card will be accepted when I give it to you sometime this weekend, and Fifty will have to cry somewhere.
Do we have a deal? ... please say we have a deal ._.
Who is the hunter?
At 8/6/11 12:53 AM, Knocturne wrote: I have an account with no uploads though Kashi ;P
I did not fail to notice how you pointedly didn't respond to the second half of my post.
Stickam is in order ;)
At 8/5/11 01:58 PM, Knocturne wrote: Also, good points cept Aigis, because I do believe the bear is doing a 3/4 stance like a performer on stage would do so the audience can see them better while they talk with another actor.
... I was quite impressed by Aigis' critique. He's right that Bear wouldn't be looking at the child, since the only eye pointing at it would be the blind one.
Yeah, he can't see out of the red patch but his head is turns 3/4ths it doesn't quite look right because his head is more ovular and I couldn't portray it quite right so I guess he's right I shoulda pulled the foreshortening a bit more to make it a more obvious illusion.
Who is the hunter?
At 8/7/11 04:46 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: The forum is kind of dead today :'(
Holidays perhaps?
At 8/7/11 04:57 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Perhaps....
Where you been Gumby?
Well these past few weeks I've been travelling about - mostly without internet.
Other than that, I've just faded away from the forum, don't really know why.
I definitely wanna get back though ...
At 8/7/11 04:46 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: The forum is kind of dead today :'(
Well, if you want something to be alive, you've got to pump the life into it, yourself.
At 8/7/11 05:30 PM, Lintire wrote:At 8/7/11 04:46 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: The forum is kind of dead today :'(Well, if you want something to be alive, you've got to pump the life into it, yourself.
I don't do well with the mouth to mouth.... unless she is hot...
At 8/7/11 05:32 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: I don't do well with the mouth to mouth.... unless she is hot...
Save your breath.... you need it to blow up your date later ;P
