Here's a song I've been working on for a while. Many of you have probably already heard it before. It's called "The Dark Within the Light." So far, I've made several versions, and I've decided that thus far, they all count as demos. As soon as I make a version that gets a rating of 4.0 or higher, I'll delete the previous versions and replace them with it. What I want to know right now is...what should I do to make it better? What parts are good (and which ones are bad?)? Any suggestions?
Also, which version so far has been the best? What elements were the best of each? I'm wondering all of these things because I plan to mix them all together, only including the best parts.
Here's a link to my music collection:
Just make sure not to mistake "The Light Within the Dark" with "The Dark Within the Light."