Very coo
The vocals and the melody are chill with excellent EQ. The vocal progression is a little boring and the lyrics are vague and cliche. Thats not to say I don't like it
He exhales her name
It feels deeper
He holds his head in shame
And it feels deeper
He knows it's not the same
But it feels deeper
He's just a drifter
She brings him closer
She makes it easy
She makes it worth it
Something inside him
Just wants to know her
He's just a dreamer
He'll never feel her
She brought him closer
She made it easy
She made it worth it
Very coo
The vocals and the melody are chill with excellent EQ. The vocal progression is a little boring and the lyrics are vague and cliche. Thats not to say I don't like it
Perhaps I am not the most original lyricist but that's what came out when I tried to speak.
Also I was thinking about it and if you think the lyrics are vague then odds are you don't know what I'm getting at and therefore wouldn't know if they are cliche or not ;)
Thanks for the review
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