At 12/2/04 04:17 PM, Frozen_fox wrote:
At 12/2/04 04:15 PM, Tubuska92 wrote:
Hey, i would like to join, i write short stories etc, i used to have flash but it got deleted and all this stuff happened so i cant get it again without wasting money. i will post some concepts and stuff up if you give me the ok
Any and all writers are welcome here. IF you have a smaple of your work would you be willing to post an extratc of it? This is just me wanting tos ee the talent we have in the guild. If you dont want to you dont have to post it but it would be appreciated.
Condider it done, this is a story about starcraft, the first part, the whole thing isnt finished though, the part is about half way through,
“Tower one do you copy, over” no response, then a static sound came on, it was fading but it was no mistaking, the hydrolisks he saw weren’t the only, they were coming his way, I ran out the door back into the training area, the door there was smashed down, I crept around and looked out the door, there were all the types of zerg, stalking around the city making sure no one left alive, dropships filled the air with people fleeing, but only few made it out, at least I don’t have to take the test, I hurried but stayed undetected to the airship port, the factory was been destroyed along with all of its tanks and weapons of destruction. I saw the biggest airship make after all the others, they must be migrating and making a new colony. I opened the door to the port, I cursed when I saw only one dropship, with a big crowd of scv’s and a few marines, all fighting to get in, no one was in yet, the door was closed, I ran over, the door opened, and an scv said after you sir ghost, I said “wait I’m not a ghost”, then I remembered I was still in the armor. I stepped in, everyone was bickering there were 5 more seats and 15 more people I chose 4 scv and one marine, I couldn’t believe everyone listened to me, if I didn’t have my night vision on they would have known I wasn’t a real ghost, I hoped in the pilots seat and said to the marine “take of you armor its going to be a long ride”, “Ok” replied the marine. He took off his helmet, and laughed “hey, Dom”, “thought id never see you again”. “lets go to the pilot room we need to follow the others before they are out of sight”. There was a sudden
* BANG * a group of hydrolisks had smashed open and we needed a minute to take off. Some of the scv’s automatically ran, but were instantly destroyed with the hydrolisks acid-breath. Now there was only 5 marines, and 2 scv’s, Dom engaged the launch sequence, but the hydrolisks were slowly drawing near ,I drew open the window and picked up Dom’s Gauss rifle and started shooting, I killed 2 of the hydrolisks but there were about ten, I didn’t bother to count, I was aiming for my third but realised I was out of ammo, the other marines I had forgot about had killed 3 but were now all slain, including the scv’s. I ran to the closet of the cockpit, and found no ammo. Suddenly I was hit with so much force I almost feel unconscious. “Forgot you didn’t have to kill them only hold them off for 1 minute” grinned dom. “Quite you” I said in a funny accent. We both had a laughed out loud for a few minutes, until realised no one was steering, Dom… who’s steering”. Dom cursed and jumped for the driver’s seat. It was to late we had already crashed, Dom being in the driving seat got smashed through the window feel instantly unconscious, Ill check on him after I check the crew, I opened the door and staggered through, all of the scv’s were dead except one. Are you all right. “No, I’ve been badly injured”. “Can you build a command center?” I asked. “Even if I did have the minerals I’m near death and would not have the strength to” came the feeble voice of the scv. “can you build anything?”….”darn, darn, darn” I said, as the scv’s life slipped away. I instantly remembered Dom, I ran back into the cockpit, and dragged Dom of the windshield facing down into the grounds, so I couldn’t see were we were. I dragged him into the main seating, and laid him down, he was in pain but he would heal, but he would probably need to see a medic, but were? I hopped outside and looked in the direction we cam, although we were only flying for 1 minute or two, the base was a dot in the distance. I suddenly saw specks above the city slowly becoming bigger, “mutilisiks”