the boys.

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stand by
sit in your chairs

beginners stand to the sound of palm hitting
entrance words flow out of his jaw

swear to
i swear

cut your fingerprint
let the color drip on the picture of the savior's mother

no adult would wish you to enter this life
only days later will it end

PFFT. Just some random shit I came up with off the top of my head again. It's about joining the American Mob during prohibition. Normally you would swear to god and whatever and then they would cut your finger and let your blood drop onto a picture of Mary. Ya. Leave some feedback, please.

[whiz85]

Why didn't you capitalize the 'I' in the sixth line? I know the entire poem is in lowercase, but it just feel weird to have the 'I' lowercase as well.

[Tremax]

At 5/29/14 11:17 PM, whiz85 wrote: Why didn't you capitalize the 'I' in the sixth line? I know the entire poem is in lowercase, but it just feel weird to have the 'I' lowercase as well.

Whiz you just have a thing for correcting this guy on his I's huh? :p

[whiz85]

At 5/30/14 01:12 AM, Tremax wrote:

At 5/29/14 11:17 PM, whiz85 wrote: Why didn't you capitalize the 'I' in the sixth line? I know the entire poem is in lowercase, but it just feel weird to have the 'I' lowercase as well.

Whiz you just have a thing for correcting this guy on his I's huh? :p

It...just...bothers...me...

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At 5/29/14 11:17 PM, whiz85 wrote: Why didn't you capitalize the 'I' in the sixth line? I know the entire poem is in lowercase, but it just feel weird to have the 'I' lowercase as well.

I don't know. I just think it looks beautifully different.
I'm weird like that dude. You're going to have to deal with it, haha.