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Vessel Full of Dreams

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As I walk and hide my inward thoughts

The warmth of my doubts and fears blanket me.

While the winds shall scatter what I sought

I crawl to cover my skin with prestige.


When winter weighs all ground, my temple there lies agape

Before the mortician to prepare with lipstick for the fire. 

What remains are the deeds that were hidden:

A vessel full of dreams and despair left alone in the mire


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Written and recorded on my old, upright piano.

I play this music, because I don't know how to speak.

Here I offer these notes, because in my flesh I don't know how to reach out.

And because I don't know how to live it out in my daily life, my love towards all can be more easily heard in these tones.

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Congrats for winning NGADM 2020! :D

Phonometrologist responds:

Thank you. Feeling a little bit of NGADM survivor's guilt because it's just about happenstance to create something within 2 weeks that the judges will find to be profound enough to win. So many great artists took part and I feel honored to come to this point.

Should actually be illegal to make something this good. Just wow.

Phonometrologist responds:

It actually is and I have been banned from writing anything new for the rest of 2020 :(
Thank you for commenting!

beautiful ty!

Phonometrologist responds:

you are beautiful
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Its beautilful! So much emotion, I can both hear and feel the song at the same time. Awesoome job!

Phonometrologist responds:

Very kind! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment

Official '20 NGADM Finals review

Super open with negative space. Before I get into anything, I feel like there were times that the production balance leaned towards the left ear, but that's the only actual complaint I could make

I love hearing the physical keys. I normally wouldn't but they really add to the atmosphere in this song and can be taken into some metaphorical devices. I don't think I even realized you had other synths and sounds going with the piano at first sense I was listening to the keys themselves so much. What I like about your style in this, is that there's less melody writing, and more using the chord progression to speak for itself. Great example I noticed is when the chimes came in and really emphasized how you're using the harmonies in this again more so than a melody.

In terms of structure, I noticed how the end was lower octaves than the beginning, which made me pay attention to later how you've pulled across the emotions throughout the structure. The first half of the song with the way it's written it comes across a little more hopeful, until the middle section and it's realizations comes through. In which case that's where the meat of the story happens. It somewhat conflicts with the feelings introduced, but not ignored. They develop as they compliment each other leading to a crescendo of sound and instruments. Which that all leads to the end where you have a reprise that's similar to the first but in a more realized and full way. It resolves, but still treads on with the familiar gusto from first. Super neat.

For production / performance, again it's super cool I think you got the sound of the piano action captured in this. What I like about this though is that it's not just a piano solo when it likely could have been. There's small but not insignificant details that really bring forward the emotions that you're trying to bring forward, and they all work together to form what's central to the timestamp. The more I dig into this with each listen, the more I appreciate each element that was brought in, and I can see why you placed them where they are. Each one brings in a new flavor or characteristic that only adds to the piece and never crowds it out. Granted most of the time we're listening to only a few things happening, which btw never felt empty.

Bravo

Phonometrologist responds:

My man, I’m impressed on how well you’re able to hear the meaning between the notes and articulate what’s happening accurately. Great read and thank you for making the time.
Just a couple points that you already mentioned that I also wanted to elaborate on:
I found that for me personally, less melody and more focus on the harmonic progressions will give a more open interpretation of the meaning that the listener can ascribe to. I think melody is more important to music universally speaking as anyone with a voice can carry a tune. But less of that leaves the piece wanting, and I prefer to have my music not to speak too much. Doesn’t mean that melody doesn’t exist in the form of chord positions. Voice leadings in harmony are considered melodies. It’s just not as obvious, and I prefer that the listener would listen for it as opposed to just hearing it.
Finally, I appreciate you recognizing the overall contour of the piano in a descending order. I prefer to view music representing that characteristic in life that all shall experience. That repetitious trait in all music and the inevitable event that happens to all is its ending. How shall we find our resolve? As time speeds up and our life becomes a fog, often the meaning will become realized on the other side of affliction.

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Score
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Uploaded
Oct 12, 2020
2:00 AM EDT
Genre
Classical
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12.1 MB
5 min 17 sec
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  • Versilian Studios - Hand Chimes

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