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Out of My Head

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Melody of a Song of Mine, which i lost. Had 2 compose it again... Glad i finally "preserved" it!


(c)opyright all reserved by >> elektroknabe aka electrodude 12 / 08 / 2020 <<


Made in One (1) Day with a Demo of Renoise [Tracker in tradition of FT2 and ProTracker] Demo (Audio captured by StereoMix of Realtec using Audacity 32Bit 48.000 Khz)...used: myvoice, a Kick, a Snare, a ClosedHH, VST CheezeMachine2, VST NeoPiano and built in FXs

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I like the creative percussion and triumphant mood. The synths are a bit cheesy, and I’m a bit thrown off when the texture gradually becomes thinner over the course of the piece. I’d like to see you flesh out the composition a bit more with some transitory moments, bolder and more dynamic melodies, and more harmonic depth. Until then, there isn’t really enough variety to keep me engaged here, even with the neat rhythmic elements and fun sound design. Keep at it, Kinupsi! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
5.25/10

definitely different! cool hat retriggers and old school dub snare delays. gigantic explosion kick is cool. decently compelling theme. the GM synth brass and piano combo is definitely on the cheesy side of things. the vocal sample sounds like it's still in the back of your throat, you can be more confident with it - pitch it up, chop it around and add some reverb and suddenly it's pro future bass. short little loop with not much else to say. windows stop sound at the end is a nice touch, not sure how intentional that was though. finish a full track!

important notes on my NGUAC review process: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1476427/18#bbspost26965604_post_text

kinupsi responds:

hi, midi...thx 4 your kind words, but i cant understand why i should compose a whole track?! It is what it should be, a loop ;) Everything else is intended, too: subtle voice, window sounds..etc ...but anyway: thx ;) (only your voting is kind of harsh: 1 and a half stars is like trashing and downvoting!)

yip

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Uploaded
Aug 13, 2020
2:34 PM EDT
Genre
Synthwave
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1.7 MB
44 sec
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