I like the creative percussion and triumphant mood. The synths are a bit cheesy, and I’m a bit thrown off when the texture gradually becomes thinner over the course of the piece. I’d like to see you flesh out the composition a bit more with some transitory moments, bolder and more dynamic melodies, and more harmonic depth. Until then, there isn’t really enough variety to keep me engaged here, even with the neat rhythmic elements and fun sound design. Keep at it, Kinupsi! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
5.25/10