Art.
I use the word "defenestrated" in the 3rd verse, so its worth listening to just for that!
"Waiting To Die"
i am this close to rising up
i say, with my fingers glued together
little light between them
said there’s no more need for votes and talk
those hopes and dreams
those fantasies are all sickly just like me
and i’m waiting to die
JUST WAITING TO DIE
here on death row, planet earth
small comforts are much obliged
there’s no more food
or clothes that ain’t covered in flies
or fleas, respectively
i beg for clemency from the jury in my mind
please review the case before you
is this justice? i ask you
THAT I’M WAITING TO DIE
I’M JUST WAITING TO DIE
in the meandering course of this soul’s life
i have been subjected to all manner of torture
also shot stabbed hanged burned poisoned beheaded
drawn and quartered starved beaten bombed defenestrated
crucified drowned cut frozen choked dismembered pressed
stretched run-through and buried alive
for all time for freakin’ thought crimes
I’M… I’M WAITING TO DIE
JUST WAITING TO DIE
BECAUSE THIS IS BULLSHIT
WE ARE ALL WALKING, TALKING TARGETS
SO I’M WAITING
this is a wake-up call
to all the sick people
Art.
This takes me back
incredible
FUCKING AMAZING!
I never liked grunge, i'm more into metal and it sub-genres... but this changed my mind!
Sweet! Thanks so much.
Nice track
So you have a nice track here the vocals are really good has a good husky rugged feel about it and as for the rest it all just sinks in pretty well, all matches, I wouldnt mind some soft tones mixed in with the vocals, but mainly this workd well.
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I wouldnt mind some soft tones mixed in with the vocals.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.