Crazy Awesome
Considering I'm you and this is your 2nd account, this review shouldn't count.
Author Comments
My first actually submission with sound and etc.
song - > > Waiting To Die< < by Ross (Gunshy)
TyyobrO responds:
Yeah
Not Bad
The animation was pretty good, I did get a little chuckle out of the DBZ audio part.
Areas of improvement: The ending a little abrupt and better audio.
TyyobrO responds:
Yeah I didnt really know where to get high-quality sounds, but thanks I will remember to make my ending a little more thought-out.
Good
Made me chuckle a little bit , the animation was well done though.
TyyobrO responds:
I'm glad you chuckeled
interesting
the animation was good and the music was alright. but the sound effects werent quite fitting. instead of the baby crying, a whine or agonized groan.
Also it seems to cut off short at the end
other than that it's not bad.
TyyobrO responds:
thanks. I will try to find better sounds next time I make a cartoon.
