I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the echoey drums at :09. Some of the synths are a little cheesy, but they blend well together. Early on, I think the texture could’ve used more low-pitched tones to balance out the frequency range, but that problem solves itself by :53. The piece has a really pleasant drone-like quality, but after a time I think it needs some more prominent melodic content to give it a stronger sense of direction, especially during the first ⅔ or so. The moody breakdown at 1:46 was nice, and you really made good use of the echo effects with that synth at 2:05 or so. The re-entry of the drums was a welcome change, and overall the piece comes together well by the end. The composition is strong overall, but I think you could do more to give it some shape and really maximize the emotional impact of the atmosphere - dynamic contrast, phrasing, and filtering are all good solutions. Besides that, I really enjoyed this one. It’s alternately dreamy and energetic, and the sound design grows on me as the piece goes on. Keep at it, Mik3l24! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.25/10