"not about the way you act, its about your actions"
Thats a good one. I didn't mind this one too much actually, the beat was very nice and easy to keep beat with and the lyrics were pretty cool. That last part I think I liked the most;)
Edit: You could always do another track that has that line as the main focus. That might a neat tune to hear...even if your not a big rap fan lol I'd review it for you ;)