Mar 24, 2005, 1 year
Mar 24, 2006, 2 year

Nice end effect

~~REVIEW~~
This one hasa darker feel and with the {GUN-SHOT} at the end, makes for a good loop to use in other flashes, so that was a nice touch with the gun shot, i wouldnt mind it being a tad {LONGER} though kinda have it build up to the gunshot and that may even give a much better end result for flashes and this little loop of yours, just an idea though, but a good one i think, i am even thinking maybe the gun shot should be abit louder aswell. something to try out i suppose, anyways good work on this one, nice end result to.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more louder gunshot would be nice, and also abit longer in the buildup

~X~

I love this short piece..

And it would fit perfectly with a series I just thought up ;) (along with your 'walk in to your death'). However, let me just finish a sentance for you..

"it might fit in the beggining of something.."

...or the end of something

has potential.

has definete potential, just needs to be longer and a little more actiont to it.