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Well, the title sounds more political than it actually is. You might be wondering "Hey glutenfree, you have 10 more days to work and polis-". Well, unfortunately not really. I have been working full-time without a day off for the last half year. I will be on vacation starting tomorrow, and I will try to enjoy it!

Therefore, this track has mostly been done on Tuesday and Thursday. Little premiere: I have never recorded my own vocals before (or at least never released it before). Auto-Tune is heavy on this one, but ... meh.
The lyrics and the rhyme are absolute nonesense. Forgive me here please, but the vocals served more as an additional instrument than anything else. I'll replace them once I find time after this contest!

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I like the smooth electric piano at the beginning and the vocals. The piece has a full atmosphere and a soothing tone quality that I really like. I’d love to know what the lyrics actually are, because despite the comments you made in the author’s description, the piece comes across as pretty serious in nature. I think the vocals could’ve been a bit more prominent in the mix, though, and the mix as a whole is pretty quiet. The quirky beat at :48 is really nice, and despite some relatively cheesy synths I’m enjoying the sound design as a whole. Much of the middle couple of minutes of the piece sounds rather minimal, but the melodic content at 2:00 helps keep my attention. I like the subtle addition of the pads at 2:36, but I think the transition at 2:46 could’ve been a bit more gradual. At the very least, some reverb to bridge the gap there would’ve been advisable imo. The pitch-bending at around 3:30 is really nice, but otherwise the final refrain sounds a bit undecorated, almost resigned in a way that matches the tone of the lyrics. I think some more variation on the final vocal friends - as well as a less abrupt ending - would help hit this piece home more. Still, I thoroughly enjoyed the mellow tone, rhythmic content, sound design, and production of the piece. Keep at it, glutenfree! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.25/10

Wonderful production. Very colorful. Pastel colors. Minimalist pastel colors and slow camera pans of people doing various things in slow motion to a pastel sunny background.

Very catchy, as well.
Congrats and good luck!

Your vocals are really good! Love the vocal melody especially

Great song. You can read a lot into the lyrics if you want. The autotuned voice makes of more fragile and emotional. It works well with the otter instruments and mood of the song. Good luck in the ngadm.

My God, this is beautiful! In two days, you made something really awesome! I hope to hear you revisit this song, and record more vocals in the future. This song has so much heart in it, I love it! I'm always looking forward to your next tune. Enjoy your vacation, and good luck brother man!

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Uploaded
Aug 29, 2019
3:11 PM EDT
Genre
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7.2 MB
4 min 1 sec
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