Pretty good. Lyrics and vocals were good. The mixing was bad. It was clipping and there was a lot of fuzz and distortion as a result. I feel some parts were too loud like the vocals at some parts. Other parts could have been turned up. Besides that it was pretty good.
Author Comments
We've all done it before. Stop blaming circumstances. Blame yourself for your own mistakes. The only person that can truly stop you from succeeding is you. Go. Get your dream.
[Lyrics]
[Chorus]
We’ve all
made the wrong choices
heard the wrong voices
all-uh this noise is
drownin me out
draggin’ me down
ragged-ly bound
This is my sound, I’m
tragically wound
up
for the next round up
no one has found us
while they surround us
we all fall out
for the next round
we all fall down
no one around us
call it profound
[Verse]
Imagine with me, for a moment
there’s a place
Where nobody really thinks
about their income max potential
or their race
in any case
it’s commonplace
that we should meet between
to stop the vi-o-lence
that’s come between us
and the infernal machine
polystyrene
amphetamines
are flashing on
computer screens
arresting your attention
from the problems
that could really mean the most
But you’d rather read the post
and forget about foremost
all your problems
at the cost of Holy Ghost
because
[Bridge]
it’s easier to live life
Just like the mad hatter
It’s easier to live life
just like it don’t matter
[Chorus]
We’ve all
made the wrong choices
heard the wrong voices
all-uh this noise is
drownin me out
draggin’ me down
ragged-ly bound
This is my sound, I’m
tragically wound
up
for the next round up
no one has found us
while they surround us
we all fall out
for the next round
we all fall down
no one around us
call it profound
[Verse]
I remember every detail
of my Grandpa Barber’s house
comin’ out of industretail
Like a cat seekin’ a mouse
And every problem
seemed to fall down in between
of where the people cannot see
and how the people seem to see him
I am free from
all the stereotypes
that everyone seems to place
on all the people
living stereotypical lives
because of their races
look at your faces
you are the reason
you make the season
you are the rhyme
but you’re so quick
to blame somebody else
ev-er-y single time, but listen
[Chorus]
We’ve all
made the wrong choices
heard the wrong voices
all-uh this noise is drownin me out
draggin’ me down
ragged-ly bound
This is my sound, I’m
tragically wound
up
for the next round up
no one has found us
while they surround us
we all fall out
for the next round
we all fall down
no one around us
call it profound
NeoAlchemist247 responds:
Hm... thank you for this insight. I’m actually working on a music video for this, so any advice for improvement is good advice. Gotta go through a lot of trial and error because I’m still limited hardware wise, but I’ve got time to do more remastering before the video drops.
One thing to consider is the phaser and effects I used, also the roughness of my voice itself. It’s a sound I am particularly fond of, but I’m still getting the grips on how to mix it into a beat seamlessly.
Thanks man!
~DJDj
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- 3 min 20 sec
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