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This is my submission for the NGADM group stage, it was made in FL Mobile, i writed the lyrics and my cousin sang them since I don't have a microphone, he's not a singer so I just asked him if he could sang them lol
Lyrics:
The time has come
i'm waking up
and the music
is freaking loud
i need the silence
when i want to sleep
but then the music
is coming to me
And deep jungle mixing next will be bette
You forgot to add 'banger' to the tags.
I like the catchy synths at the beginning and the sense of climax into :15. The vocals sound good, but the lyrics themselves are a bit cliche. I liked the drop at :50 too, although the drum samples and some of the synths also lack originality. Later in the piece, there isn’t a lot of variety, perhaps with the exception of the variations at the second drop. Still, I think you could’ve done more with the composition here (a fun, contrasting breakdown, perhaps?), and the sound design and arrangement of the piece are pretty generic. Still, the mixing, rhythmic content, and progression are all enjoyable. Keep at it, Dovax! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.25/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7.25/10
IM SHAKING MY BUTT
oooo yes
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