great job !
great job !
I like the atmospheric vibe at :05 and the melodic content. The drum samples seem a bit generic, but they sit well in the mix. I like the lead instrument a lot, and there’s a good sense of climax into 1:15. The minimalism there made the progression feel a bit anti-climactic, and the transition and re-intro at 1:45 felt a little lazy. Perhaps my biggest problem with the piece is that it sounds very generic, especially considering the pads, transitions, and structure. Filling in the texture with reverb alone is a bit risky. I really would’ve liked to see some more harmonic depth throughout the piece. It’s a catchy piece with solid mastering and an enjoyable atmosphere. The composition is extremely lack-luster, unfortunately. Keep at it, Dovax. ;)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
Instrumentation and sound design
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
Originality and uniqueness
Overall (how do the above elements interact?)
Default FL Stock FL snare at 02:00 kinda ruined the track for me, but overall it was enjoyable.
Theyre actually the kick and snare stock of fl, i dont know im starting to like them a lot haha
Cool! I like it:)
Thanks man! good luck :)
Yet another awesome dovax song! This is not really my favorite because it seems underwhelming compared to your other songs, but you did a really good job getting that marshmello vibe in there. Good luck with the NGUAC!
Thanks! And yeah i know im just trying to perfect this kind of style, its the same as Sunset
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