dense
Future house track with some influence of Marshmello, this is for the NGUAC Final, i wish the best of luck to all competitors, even if i dont win i want to thank the people of newgrounds for frontpaging my stuff lately, its really a blessing for me, thank you very much, hoping you enjoy this one, still up for change tho
dense
great job !
I like the atmospheric vibe at :05 and the melodic content. The drum samples seem a bit generic, but they sit well in the mix. I like the lead instrument a lot, and there’s a good sense of climax into 1:15. The minimalism there made the progression feel a bit anti-climactic, and the transition and re-intro at 1:45 felt a little lazy. Perhaps my biggest problem with the piece is that it sounds very generic, especially considering the pads, transitions, and structure. Filling in the texture with reverb alone is a bit risky. I really would’ve liked to see some more harmonic depth throughout the piece. It’s a catchy piece with solid mastering and an enjoyable atmosphere. The composition is extremely lack-luster, unfortunately. Keep at it, Dovax. ;)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/2
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the above elements interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10
Default FL Stock FL snare at 02:00 kinda ruined the track for me, but overall it was enjoyable.
Not only at 2:00, in the brakes i actually used the kick and snare stock of fl, i dont know im starting to like them a lot haha
Cool! I like it:)
Thanks man! good luck :)
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