This piece is fairly dry - it doesn't have enough texture - however some sections sound really good. I like the style you've gone for with the crackles of an old record, it adds character. The start builds up gradually, and when the beat comes in I started tapping to it. However, it becomes very repetitive through most of the rest of the piece, which does get a bit boring. I would suggest adding more variation, and maybe you could add another instrument over the top to beef up the melody a bit.
My favourite part is between 01:20 - 01:40, there is a really fun syncopated rhythm with extra melody. From there it calms down nicely to the ending, along with the crackles again. If the rest of the piece was like this final third, I would give a higher rating, however it is too repetitive and lacks texture. 2.5 out of 5