hi!!!!!

I enjoyed listening to this - it is fun and calm, it keeps the audience interested but relaxed. I like the gradual introduction of instruments, it starts building up well to the second part. Most of this piece feels like it is building up to something, however never quite gets there, which is slightly disappointing, but it keeps the theme of the song - ambient.
You switch between light melody, a melody with a beat behind it, and just the drumbeat, which gives the piece good variation and keeps it interesting. I think you have a perfect mix of instruments - not too many, which could overload the listener, but enough to not be boring.
At around 2 minutes, towards the end of the piece, the main melody gets mixed with dissonant chords. Although this is an attempt to build up to the final section, I think it is too distracting and repetitive, especially when it suddenly changes to a much more relaxed idea.
Overall, this is a very fun yet relaxing piece of music, which has enough variation to keep it interesting throughout. 4 out of 5 :)

sounds like something i make for a loop for a animation like gentle wind pushing hair and leaves