I like it !!!! It's good !
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I like it !!!! It's good !
Mmmmm not bad tbh. Might use it for a gd level. Not sure yet
Cute riffs and fun rhythmic elements at the beginning. Some of your synths were a bit cheesy, though, and I think there might’ve been a tad too much reverb for my tastes on some of the instruments. The progression is a little slow-paced, however, and after a minute or so the texture remains quite minimal. There isn’t a lot of harmonic depth to the piece, and while I’m glad you put in some melodic content after a while (~1:48), the melodic phrases could’ve been a bit more varied and dynamic. I also really like the delayed transition at 2:04. I think that’s a really effective way of calling attention to the final refrain of your piece. At 2:22 and 2:29, there are a couple of unpleasant popping sounds, first in my right ear and then in my left. That could be any number of things, from peaking/clipping to a misplaced radio effect to a microphone click on whatever recording device you used, but it strikes me as a bit of a sloppy mistake tbh. Overall, this piece comes together well by the end, but I still think the composition is a bit underwhelming, especially harmonically, and elements of the sound design sound like presets. That said, I thought the mixing and mastering here was rather strong, despite the reverb issues and mic popping. Keep at it, Curruff! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
Instrumentation and sound design
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
Originality and uniqueness
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
Might use this for gmd level..not sure yet, but it's pretty perfect for something short. Nice.
i love the mood, it remembers me 2 much of a famous song...if u want 2 compare the little coincedence: Moment of Love by Art of Noise...anyway, keep it up...moved and still moves me!
Thanks for the feedback! Although, I just want to say that this song was 100% original, even if it does resemble a different song. I try to make original content, and it's hard to check with this kind of stuff.
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