Ha ha! This sounds much better than my first music! Keep it up and Im sure that you can make professional tracks in the future!

Really weird chords. The first synth is cool though.

The guitar pluck thing that comes in sounds so weird though, and the melody doesn't fit the chords (unless the theme you're going for is c h a o s ).

The mixing is kinda annoying with the drums being so god damn loud compared to everything else.

Though many of the sounds other than the pluck fit together quite nicely.

Overall a mixed bag. 5/10.

Ok not bad, a bit messy around the start and melody cud have a better sound but for this being ur first song this is good! My first song was worse than this (second audio posted on my account) and earrape. This isn't too bad but risers were a little off and drums gud be better as well as the beat but other pretty decent for your first song! 3.5/5 stars for u! Btw I scouted u. ;)

pretty good