it might just be my personal opinion, but some of the notes and rhythms sound very... off. the instruments all sound great, but some of the, i'd say almost experimental, rhythms and passing notes could use some fine-tuning. als, it's quite chaotic. if the instruments faded in and out as they played and if some of the volumes were reduced i think this would make for a more pleasant listening experience. otherwise, it's decent. :)
Author Comments
I had no idea that i would ever make something like this. But apparently i did. It all started with an idea what popped into my head when listening to Deltakais' latest upload. Im not really a fan of piano, so usually whenever there is a solo piece, i just kinda gloss over it. However i thought if i could make a composition, which is written for piano and piano only, and turn it into a more complex instrumental piece.
Well, as im uploading this, then the final answer is: Yes
*None of the melodies are written by me, so i highly advice you to check out the original*
Hope you enjoy :)
Deltakai responds:
You are absolutely and 10000% correct. No personal opinions here, they are all valid and objective criticisms. There is much more to be said, but these are definitely the core issues at hand.
Sounds like a song that would be in minecraft xD
I like it, it's relaxing btw c:
Could be used in a video-game as a music for a village tbh
good song!
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