I think the writing is prerry goos, but a bit repetitive at times. Changing up the words being used would add a bit of variety to this.
For example, you used the statement this is both good and bad multiple times. The wroting almost became predictable to a point because of small things like this.
The voice acting was clear and precise, but contained a ton of awkard pauses and emphasis on parts of words where they seemed unnatural. Just removing the pauses in between words would make this feel more natural and smoother.
NyanaCreation 
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