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i made this for competition on chipscompo.com with a theme of "isolated from the world". Ironically, I actually did feel isolated from the world while composing this.

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Sounds like waking up the day after losing someone, and coming to terms with it throughout the day.

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So this was really good I like the start of this especially you bring some interesting sounds and you really did make it feel that vibe of an isolated feeling that is what you were going for I believe this was a nice tune though and I really enjoyed your work here really hope to hear more from you because this was a beautiful piece of sound anyways keep up the amazing work as always

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This is an Official NGUAC '18 Knockout Round Review

Beginning Comments: A tranquil beginning filled with emotion. A violin VST that I can instantly place who's using without prior knowledge.

Production / Mixing: It's quiet, but it complements what you're doing. You probably could have filled up a little more of the volume simply by raising the mix with a limiter or something, but for all intents and purposes this works fine. Not many instruments to work with so the balancing is simple, but even so I could be thrusted into the world your making.

Composition / Structure: To say this is soothing is an understatement. The composition is open but it's not simple. A lot of trills that didn't upset the mood or take away the energy. I enjoyed the humanization of the violin, but it sounded off in a couple of spots here and there. You also allowed each of there instruments there own space to give their voices instead of having this be simply a violin solo. There's also some elements I missed without listening deeply the first time like the harp near the end. Some really nice touches that deepened the development of the theme. As for the structure, while the song is short, it's not immature. I maybe would have liked to have this song be a littler long since there's ideas you have to make this a much longer and bigger song, but I can still enjoy this as a short ode. I can envision this being a slight aside in a musical which could make way for bigger plot points. The only complaint I have is the outro. I envisioned the note being held about three times longer with a resolving ensemble chord to back the violin. Or even no ensemble works too, since each has they're own flair, but I just felt the ending note didn't have time to exhale.

Sound Design: Great. The violin I think is a little too crude for this style, but I could tell you used this for how highly dynamic it is. Aside from that, lovely.

Ending Comments: This is a well crafted short without lacking depth.

Score:

Production - 1

Composition - 1

Structure - 0.5

Sound Design - 1

Replay - 1

Total - 9

*Disclaimer - to make judging consistent with other judges, individual category scores are multiplied by 2 to make a total possible 10 points.

Everratic responds:

Thank you for the review! I get what you mean by the ending note not having enough time to exhale. That could have been executed better. As for the ensemble chord, I don't think that would be appropriate for what I was aiming for, but I should have tried something like that just to know what it would sound like.

I didn't expect to get a score as high as 9 on this, so I'm very happy about that :D Thanks again

I love the emotional appeal of the beginning and the melodic content at :16. I also really like how it's hard to tell if this piece is supposed to be uplifting or creepy for quite some time. At the end, I'm still not sure, in fact. Perhaps the piece is a tad minimalistic, and definitely foregrounds the melodic content quite heavily, but I think those elements actually serve the emotive qualities of the piece in this case. Compliments again on your very-good string samples, btw. The last note, high-pitched though it was, still sounded pretty authentic. Very enjoyable piece, BO! Raw, beautiful melodies win the day. ^_^

Everratic responds:

". I also really like how it's hard to tell if this piece is supposed to be uplifting or creepy for quite some time."
I'm glad you appreciated this feature! This represents the shattering of a reoccurring fantasy. The note at the very end is articulated in a way that's intended to shock the listener a bit, which represents waking up to reality.

Thank you for the review!

Seriously. This is incredibly beautiful. Sounds like a soundtrack for a short film. Beautiful.

Everratic responds:

Thanks so much! Iā€™m glad it sounds that professional!

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Everratic
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LucidShadowDreamer
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4.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 4, 2018
5:44 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
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4.2 MB
1 min 52 sec
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