I love me some chiptunes! I like this despite some issue which I will go over now. There is a lot of distortion in the intro from :20-40 and overall, I think the song is a little too loud. That or the synths are a little too harsh on the ears which make the song difficult to listen to and enjoy. But with the negatives out of the way, let's look at a lot of the good this has! The composition itself is quite nice, there's a lot of variety to it and it never gets too repetitive. But overall this has a lot of potential! It's just some stuff on the mixing end that needs to be looked at. Keep working! I am eager to hear your next piece!