Interesting piece you have here, I'd definitely say that this gives me NES vibes.
I really like what the drop that you did at 2:08, with the synth going up and down in the mix to put you in a sort of trance with a rumbling bass trudging forward with each hit -I find it sort of enthralling to say the least-.
I have only a few complaints:
- The certain parts of the mix get a little repetitive, notably the off-beat hits since there is no instance where you take a break from it (other than the start/end).
- Some of the higher frequencies feel a little too harsh, I would suggest removing the grittiness of it to make the song more pleasant to listen to.
Overall its a nice song with a decent mix, especially when considering the context of this being experimental music.