This is quite nice - very epic! I like choice in chords you made and most of the melodies seems fitting. However I feel that the drums has more of a electronic feel to them than the rest of the piece. Though it does fit very well with the "stutter" at 1:27. After that, I feel that things are getting a little muddy. Too many things going on and the song is drowning in instruments. The choir is a nice relief and works as an "intro" to the silent part. Again, the drums begins to feel a little too powerfull but I liked the slight change in percussion towards the end. Good job!