I enjoyed the introduction, your choice of chords is warm and welcoming, introducing the feel of the rest of the piece well. The harp is a bit shocking and breaks my immersion a bit.

Something with a slower attack might have worked better, such as another violin or something.

I enjoy the energy of the next section. The momentum pulls you along. The bass works well to anchor the realistic instruments to the more electronic ones.

Around 1:38 it gets a bit busy and the piece loses focus. It's also quite muddy here. Whenever something is muddy I always suggest the person switch their master bus to mono and adjust the EQ as it makes mud much more apparent.

The composition kept me interested throughout and reminds me of some classic NG tracks (in a good way). The song ends in a satisfactory manner but could have maybe sign-posted it was about to end more.

I noticed your song isn't making use of the stereo spectrum very much. Try panning more L/R and using mid/side mixing to widen it.