I like this a lot, but do you mind explaining why this is under "metal, rock"? Because this sounds like absolutely neither.
It's the closest to Indie Rock I could find.
You should make the vocals a bit louder. It feels like the rest of the song is walking all over them.
Sounds to something new that I never heard...
...And is very good ;)
Suspensive and jumpy, as well as its sensational lyrics, that have a voice that sounds, not too far from ghosts in a choir during a funeral.
I love how this song tries something new, experimental stuff is some of the best! Great work, would like to see the full lyrics too!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.