I can hear the improvements on the music and vocal mix. Its cleaner.
Vibes remind me of The Cure in some ways. Melody is simple but catchy.
*Experiment using a delay/reverb pedal in realtime on your voice when you do your practicing. Effects on vocals added in afterwards during production lose part of the organic feel.
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