Same what this dude said :D
Musically it's cool, melodies and vocals flow smoothly, love that part after 2:24.. It has this nice nostalgic-romantic feel, .. If I were a girl I would fuck you right after hearing this
On the technical side I don't have much to rate, all sounds pretty clean and natural to me.. mean I don't have any experience/tips to share with this genre, but it looks like you know what you're doing :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.