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Your volume levels are too high. I suggest experimenting with your sound levels. The drum patterns are nice but I agree with the first comment the song is really bland when it comes to melodic progression and that synth sound can get tiring what I would do is try adding different instruments, Like Piano or Pads etc. The Drop could use work(however I do like the sound around 01:08).
When you do work on your drop try to give it some variety. I recommend studying a couple of dubstep songs. Don't be afraid to add more instruments to your song.( as long as they compliment each other) Also when in doubt YouTube that Sh*t.
Not trying to make excuses, but FL Studio volume levels versus rendered volume levels seem to be very different. Been trying to fix that.
I spent so much time working on the main bass and instead people like the 1:08 sound. I altered a preset and the LFO pattern lol.
Yeah, I guess you're right about the adding more instruments on the drop. I kinda suck at composition ://///////
Thanks for the detailed review.
Don't worry my dubstep song [Forever Us] Sounds really bad compared to this. This isn't that bad, just keep trying:)
Thanks. Hopefully I can find out how to make it better.
I liked the drum progression and the bass growl sounded pretty good but most of the song is just a single instrument and drums. I would try layering multiple instruments together and adding a bit more melodic progression.
However, there still is potential.
I don't even know what I did when I made that bass, it just sort of happened lol.
Here's the thing: I know the intro and drop lack a lot of melodic progression, but the problem is I don't know how to fix that. I've tried a few things and they don't compliment eachother very well. I've been drawing blanks, basically.
Thanks for the review, I know I can always count on you.
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