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I like this one better than my previous work. Has that, catch to it. Photo took at Midnight on Summer Equinox.

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== This is an official NGUAC Review ==

Oh cool, an actual legitimate chiptune track. Those drums even sound authentic, like maybe they came out of famitracker or something? I dunno, but I can dig the authenticity. Unfortunately, what I don't dig so much is the mix of the track - it's far too sparse. It needs some elements to pad it out, like maybe chords played by saw waves or something.

I also think that this song is way too repetitive - you pretty much have one idea and repeat it over and over again through the entire track. Additional sections with different ideas and chord progressions could really help this track stay interesting over its runtime.

Mini-scores (not used to calculate final score in any way - just so you know what needs improvement):

Arrangement: 1/4
Composition: 2/4
Sound Design: 3/4
Production: 3/4

Overall: 5.8

JigglypuffClient responds:

I know that this isn't very good. Not nearly as nice as my first submitted score. I will continue trying though. Someday I'll have it down.

Sounds pretty, well done!

JigglypuffClient responds:

Thanks!

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Jul 20, 2017
1:20 PM EDT
Genre
Chipstep
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2 min 42 sec
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