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Feb 8, 2017 | 11:51 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.3 MB
2 min 34 sec
Score
3.92 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.92 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
795 Plays | 24 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Chipstep
Tags:
8-bit

Author Comments

I doubt I can do better. No words for this. Hopefully goes onto great things.

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the melodic content at :16 a lot. I think the percussion could use a bit more clarity - maybe some compression and more careful equalizing could help. I think you overuse the transition with the “crash” effect (like at :33), but you clearly have a good sense of harmony. There are a lot of staccato sounds in the mix, though - some pads might help smooth that out and add to the texture. You might also want to consider adding some more reverb to enhance the texture. I think the section at 1:35 was a cool idea, if a bit cheesy. The piece has a cutesy and fun vibe overall. Perhaps the composition is a bit underwhelming - it could certainly use some more shape (dynamic contrast, phrasing, filtering, etc.). The piece is also lacking on originality a bit, but overall you’ve demonstrated that you have pretty strong compositional skills, and I think all the frequencies are well-balanced in the mix here. Keep at it, JigglypuffClient. :)

7/10


JigglypuffClient responds:

Yeah, its difficult to make something that hits all points with such limited programs I use, but I can agree with almost all of things you said. Thank you


mutty99mutty99

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good job, altough at 1:24 there is a little bit dissonance xD
If you keep it up like this you'll be able to make tracks a lot better than this ;)


JigglypuffClient responds:

Thank you. If i had to change something that would be it.


TroisnyxTroisnyx

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The chords are nice, that's the first thing I recognise. Mid-range synth sounds OK and parts of the melody are actually memorable; the high synth sounds like it doesn't really know what to do in the way of melody, so it's darting all over the place.

1:24 sounded quite jarring. Actually did cause me to reel back. It was the dissonance, more than anything.

1:43's drum fill sounded quite nice, but before that sounded a bit too stark.

No, I sincerely believe you CAN do better -- memorable melodies and harmonies are well within your grasp, with a good amount of practice, listening and influence and stuff. This piece feels alright to start with, but once 1:44 kicks in we have more of the beginning. There isn't much buildup to the piece. While I am not asking for fakebit-like layers and sounds and effects, what I'd hoped for was that this piece would actually build up some tension. The title suggests a sort of battle, or struggle. The piece sounded too.... empty..... to be either of those.


JigglypuffClient responds:

Thank you very much! I appreciate you saying that. I need to learn to make something other then chiptune.