I like the intensity at the beginning, but I might’ve asked for more of a clear intro instead of throwing the listener right into the action. I also think the rhythm at :28 is a little overly convoluted - same with 2:38, in fact. The part at :49 is really cool. I love how you made some effort to vary the energy level there, even if the texture changes very slowly in this piece. The drums are nice and loud and crisp, too. The piece has much more of an easygoing vibe by around 1:45, but that makes me a little concerned about coherence. The structural progression is clear, but I would’ve liked to see you give this piece some more shape. Varying the riff you play every 20 seconds doesn’t give the piece any variety in terms of dynamics, phrasing, or energy levels, which is what you needed to keep my attention after a while. I did enjoy the solos at 3:33, though. I just want to see you try to structure your piece more around emotional heights and contrast rather than continuous streams of riffs. You’re clearly a talented guitarist, but the composition feels a bit thrown together. Keep it up, Metallica1136! ;)
Really cool sounding guitars and massive skill showed as always. It reminds of something that could play in a fighting game (Guilty Gear kinda stuff). I feel maybe a little too light on the low frequencies but that might be my headset fault!
Good luck in NGADM!
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