I like the emotional piano at the beginning. The kick drum at :31 sounded a bit too sub-bassy for a piece like this, and the strings at :50 sounded a bit inauthentic (you can tell by the slow attack on each note). The progression here is smooth, and I actually like the energy and drive that the drums add to the piece after a while. You have a good sense of harmony and flow, but I think you could’ve done more with the texture for a lot of this piece. There are many moments of minimalism, and there’s also little coherence in the structure throughout the piece. I like the emotion and moods here. The composition just needs a bit more effort. Keep at it, Veronina. ;)
not bad stuff, but it never really jumped out and grabbed my attention either. that drum kit really doesn't fit to be honest.
nice progressions and the melodies are nice too - you should work on dynamics and transitions and sections and stuff like that.
Thanks! I'll think about these carefully!
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